Sunday, November 6, 2011

Death By Love (fiction by snakesrule) A Victorious Love Story

Description: Tori's best friend is severely hurt in a car accident, putting her in a dangerous state. Now she must learn to live with losing a close friend. Everything turns upside down when her boyfriend, Ryder Daniels dumps her after dating her for 6 months. A series of tragic events occur on Tori, and then she learns to cope with life... But who will turn her world back around?
CHAPTER 1- THE CALL
Tori smiled and laughed with her friends. Life was perfect for Tori Vega right now. Everything was just the way she wanted it to be in high school. A hot boyfriend, awesome friends, cool school, good grades... It was just perfect! What else could one teenage girl ask for? Nothing, that is to her. The bell rang and Tori threw the leftovers of her lunch in the garbage.
"I hope Sikowitz is gonna teach us something... Something that's well... Not physco," Beck joked around, "How bout' you guys?"
"Don't care, baby." Jade said.
The rest of the day flew by. And Tori just couldn't wait for the next! Hollywood Arts High School was the miracle that changed her life. It was amazing. Tori walked to the sidewalk when her cellphone rung.
"Hello," She said.
"T-t-t-ori!" A familiar voice cried, "Sh-e... She's in the hospital right now."
"Huh?" Tori asked, "Do I know you? Who's in the hospital? Are you sure you have the right Tori? I'm Tori Vega."
"Yes, I'm talking about you," The voice replied, "It's me, Amanda Cressing! Our daughter, Ellen... She's in the hospital!"
"Ellen!?" Tori cried, "My best friend? She can't be! What happened? Please tell me, Mrs. Cressing!"
"Well, she was driving herself home from school," Mrs. Cressing said, "But then this man found her on the street. She was in a car crash! David is here with us, too. Please visit the hospital if you can. Our sweetheart would appreciate if her best friend showed up."
"I'm on my way," Tori said, "I just can't believe Ellen was in a car crash!"
"Neither can I, Tori..." Mrs. Cressing sighed.

3 comments:

  1. man this is really good! its so intense for sucha short amount of content!!!! MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEE! I'm dying for some

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  2. You have one of your three strikes filled out. Please don't do this. :)))))))) -THE ADMINISTRATORS

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  3. 11boys11 is 11 years old!

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